Thesis statement four

Next, in class activity, we are required to correct ten thesis statements given in groups. Actually, all of the thesis statements are coming from us which need correction. My group has to correct the thesis statement generated by Shazrina, she told us. Towards the end, each group has to present the corrected thesis statement and explain why. I just hope that my statement is correct but I was wrong and it is corrected by Jumi’s group. It’s OK. At least I know that I still have a chance to do well. Thanks to all.